I actually finished this story about a week ago but I didn't post it here. I've been told that the ending was pretty great and not what was expected so I believe it would be an enjoyable read.
I've made the story itself much easier to read by adding spacings between each new paragraph and different dialogue. The way used to be is what you would typically see in books to where there is hardly any spacing between paragraphs. Instead they use indentations but it's really only useful for paper and is dificult to read on a computer.
Note: For some reason, the spaces won't save. Unfortunately, you'll probably have to squint often to read.
My story can be read in one sitting I'd say about 20-30 Minutes (Depending on your reading speed).
I'm also going to be making a LOT of edits, in order to improve the story. So any reviews/corrections will be enormously appreciated.
Don't forget to Follow my Blog because I will be adding more stories soon!
I have a few short stories as well.
My story can also be found in the Forums of RuneScape and Sa'ls Realm.
Please Enjoy!
-Eraser
